Destiny

Even our heart’s away
We’re destined to met
Build loved with our way
And make it perfect

Truly gives a picture
On my empty frame
You framed me beautifully
And gives decorations

Our destiny was written
Make it surreal
With our own plans
Create memories more

Spend timeless
Never ending love
Until on our dawn
Keep eternally.

Your my destiny!


It’s a raw !!! I don’t know what to write and yet this words are appears on my mind. I know it wasn’t my best but I keep trying to share what’s on my head tonight. Thanks and God bless 😉

SnowHeart

25 Comments

  1. SnowHearT says:

    Thanks ❤️

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  2. Nida Khan says:

    Such honesty in your writing!
    Keep it up😉

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  3. creativeenvision says:

    You are Welcome 🙂

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  4. SnowHearT says:

    Thank you ❤️

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  5. SnowHearT says:

    You can do it…Lol…You know how hard to me to make my English better.

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  6. cyncoed says:

    Haha!! Your English is a thousand times better than my Welsh ! One day, maybe ….

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  7. creativeenvision says:

    Lovely! I loved reading it. Keep rocking 🙂

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  8. SnowHearT says:

    It is fine if you write it in Welsh too..

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  9. SnowHearT says:

    Yeah, I know and I take a risks to post that “Destiny” with no drafts and no edits just write what’s on my minds. And I am not even sure if the title is fit on the contents.

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  10. cyncoed says:

    The important thing is that you have creative original thought. Everything else will fall into place with time. I wish I could write in Welsh, but it would probably sound horrific !!

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  11. SnowHearT says:

    Thank you so much …😍

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  12. SnowHearT says:

    Yeah,, it is translations sometimes hard on me… my vocabulary wasn’t enough…But I keep trying to make it better…thanks for helping me on this…

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  13. SnowHearT says:

    Wow 😮… it’s so amazing 😉 I can’t imagine it makes more powerful now you rephrase it…

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  14. cyncoed says:

    Again, the above are your thoughts , just perhaps translated in a different way

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  15. cyncoed says:

    I think you’re thoughts are lovely but the translation isn’t always necessarily doing them justice

    Even our heart’s apart
    We’re destined to meet
    In a love constructed
    perfectly formed

    You paint the picture
    On my empty canvas
    Framed me beautifully
    Each detailed touch

    Our destiny was written
    Make it surreal
    In our hands
    New memories born

    Spent timeless
    A love without end
    Until our daybreak
    As eternity dawns

    You’re my destiny !

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  16. SnowHearT says:

    But you rephrase it so well

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  17. cyncoed says:

    They’re your thoughts, not mine !

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  18. SnowHearT says:

    Yes it is…Thanks…

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  19. SnowHearT says:

    Thanks ….yours is much better…

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  20. cyncoed says:

    Sorry if not !

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  21. cyncoed says:

    Do you mean ‘build’ as in magtayo or more like itinayo (constructed) because it would give it a different feel if the latter =

    “Even our heart’s apart
    We’re destined to meet
    In a love constructed
    perfectly formed”

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  22. SnowHearT says:

    Thanks for boosting me . I appreciate it so much ❤️❤️❤️

    Liked by 1 person

  23. I believe you are good …in fact one of the best …hey life is all about learning new things and so on…Keep on

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