Even our heart’s away
We’re destined to met
Build loved with our way
And make it perfect
Truly gives a picture
On my empty frame
You framed me beautifully
And gives decorations
Our destiny was written
Make it surreal
With our own plans
Create memories more
Spend timeless
Never ending love
Until on our dawn
Keep eternally.
Your my destiny!
It’s a raw !!! I don’t know what to write and yet this words are appears on my mind. I know it wasn’t my best but I keep trying to share what’s on my head tonight. Thanks and God bless 😉
SnowHeart
WORDSNOW HEART 
Welcome.
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Thanks ❤️
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Such honesty in your writing!
Keep it up😉
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💗
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You are Welcome 🙂
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Thank you ❤️
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You can do it…Lol…You know how hard to me to make my English better.
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Haha!! Your English is a thousand times better than my Welsh ! One day, maybe ….
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Lovely! I loved reading it. Keep rocking 🙂
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It is fine if you write it in Welsh too..
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Yeah, I know and I take a risks to post that “Destiny” with no drafts and no edits just write what’s on my minds. And I am not even sure if the title is fit on the contents.
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The important thing is that you have creative original thought. Everything else will fall into place with time. I wish I could write in Welsh, but it would probably sound horrific !!
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Thank you so much …😍
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Yeah,, it is translations sometimes hard on me… my vocabulary wasn’t enough…But I keep trying to make it better…thanks for helping me on this…
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Wow 😮… it’s so amazing 😉 I can’t imagine it makes more powerful now you rephrase it…
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Again, the above are your thoughts , just perhaps translated in a different way
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I think you’re thoughts are lovely but the translation isn’t always necessarily doing them justice
Even our heart’s apart
We’re destined to meet
In a love constructed
perfectly formed
You paint the picture
On my empty canvas
Framed me beautifully
Each detailed touch
Our destiny was written
Make it surreal
In our hands
New memories born
Spent timeless
A love without end
Until our daybreak
As eternity dawns
You’re my destiny !
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But you rephrase it so well
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They’re your thoughts, not mine !
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Yes it is…Thanks…
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Thanks ….yours is much better…
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Sorry if not !
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Do you mean ‘build’ as in magtayo or more like itinayo (constructed) because it would give it a different feel if the latter =
“Even our heart’s apart
We’re destined to meet
In a love constructed
perfectly formed”
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Thanks for boosting me . I appreciate it so much ❤️❤️❤️
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I believe you are good …in fact one of the best …hey life is all about learning new things and so on…Keep on
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