Be my Thorn

You know my heartaches
Swollen my heart deeply
Leaves scars that shoned
Even the memories stayed

See the sadness in my eyes
Embedded of emotions
You may see me laughing
Deep within is breaking

A broken grandeur glass
Never be whole again
The magnificent of brokenness
Shines through the rays of light

Like a rose in a flower pot
Shine is gone and fading
When the sun is setting
And leaves a beautiful view

Be my Thorn and protects me
From the one wants to destroy
Be my Thorn and be my shield
From the one wants to hurt

Be my Thorn and stayed with me
To grow me beautifully with you
Be my Thorn and a decorations
To maintain the gorgeous of me

Be my Thorn to live with me
And never be alone
Be my Thorn to create memories
And lives in a beautiful pot

You are my Thorn
Saves from my heartaches
You are my Thorn
Decorated my scars

I am a rose with your thorn
Meet to be destined
Forever and eternal
With everlasting love


  1. Sanjuna says:

    Nice one snow heart..

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  2. cheriewhite says:

    It’s my pleasure!

    Liked by 1 person

  3. SnowHearT says:

    Awe, thank you 😊 Cherie ❤️❤️❤️

    Liked by 1 person

  4. cheriewhite says:

    Beautiful post! BTW, I just nominated you for the BrainStorm award because I think your blog is awesome! Wishing you the best of luck!

    Liked by 1 person

  5. SnowHearT says:

    Awe, Thank you Chetna 💗💗💗

    Liked by 1 person

  6. Chetna says:

    A beautiful and different idea !🌟💫✨
    Well written,Lyn.😊💜

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  7. SnowHearT says:

    Awe, Thank you ♥️♥️♥️

    Liked by 1 person

  8. Nabeela says:

    You make it possible with your talent….

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  9. SnowHearT says:

    Thank you Nabeela ♥️♥️♥️ Thorn is a hero sometimes 👍

    Liked by 1 person

  10. Nabeela says:

    I have read many poets describing thorn as a killer….😜 But your poem explained it differently and amazingly….🥰

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  11. Navin says:


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  12. SnowHearT says:

    Thank you dear ositajuliet 😊♥️♥️♥️


  13. SnowHearT says:

    Thank you Kritika ❤️❤️❤️

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  14. SnowHearT says:

    Hahaha…Hero talaga si Thorn diyan ❤️❤️❤️save her broken heart.


  15. SnowHearT says:

    Thank you 😊 isnahashmi ♥️♥️♥️

    Liked by 1 person

  16. SnowHearT says:

    Thank you dear Lia ❤️❤️❤️

    Liked by 1 person

  17. SnowHearT says:

    The thorn that be a hero ..♥️♥️♥️

    Liked by 1 person

  18. Navin says:

    The beauty of this thorn

    Liked by 1 person

  19. Lia says:

    This is amazing! 🙏🌹🏹❤️

    Liked by 2 people

  20. isnahashmi says:


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  21. Jan Paul says:

    Naalala ko yung kantang “hero.” Hahaha wala lang. Skl hahahaha

    Liked by 2 people

  22. Nelson MCBS says:

    Reblogged this on Nelson MCBS.

    Liked by 2 people

  23. Kritika says:

    ‘A broken grandeur glass’ awesome line.

    Liked by 2 people

  24. ositajuliet says:

    wow i love that

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